Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Paraphrase




     Seven-months traveling to Mars in the space are not tortuous, but the speed is an important to Mars. In inside space the radiation exposure can be a huge problem and lethal because of the lack of the gravity which leaves astronauts in a dangerous comic energy more than being in orbit or the moon’s way (Kluger, 2004, P.48).

1 comment:

  1. Good work, Adel. Make sure you don't change the meaning of the original passage. A seven-month trip to Mars is torturous! Can you change that word to something else, maybe "intolerable?"

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